Talking to real people

Esta mañana yo fui al parque central porque queria hablar español con la gentes. Yo compré algunas cosas al mercado: dos bolsas, dos manteles, y una mochila pequeña por mi nieto. Después yo fui al supermercado, compré pan y jugo de manzana. Yo caminaba en el parque y vi un hombre pobre. Yo le pregenté, "necesita el pan?" "Si," él dijo. Yo le di el pan y jugo de manzana. Él me pidío cinco quetzales. Yo dije que el pan es mejor. Después, yo hablé con una mujer se llama Soraida. Ella vendía las cosas de Antigua, pero yo no tenía mas dinero. Nosotros hablamos durante treinta minutos. (with apologies to seasoned Spanish speakers)

Translation: This morning I went to central park because I wanted to speak Spanish with the people. I bought several things at the market: two bags, two tablecloths, and a small backpack for my grandson. Then I went to the supermarket and bought bread and apple juice.  I was walking in the park and saw a poor man. I asked him, "Do you need bread?" "Yes," he said. I gave him the bread and juice. He asked me for 5 quetzales (money). I told him that bread is better. Later I talked with a woman named Soraida. She was selling souvenirs from Antigua, but I didn't have any more money. We talked for thirty minutes.